Talk:Okai (Blackcove)/@comment-10943908-20150406125454

Great to have you, Blackcove! Okai seems like a great character, however, he would be fairly old now (The Yarossi Enlightenment was nearly 100 years ago), and the Yarossi have very crude technology. You could explain the age with something like genetic manipulation to extend lifespan, but I would suggest you also add something about genetic code breakdown (Maybe memory isn't so good, or he has a slow reaction time, or something along those lines.

And one last thing I just remembered, the galaxy as a whole doesn't know about the Lacari, however we could say that the Yarossi did. Despite this, the people of the galaxy (And Okai himself) wouldn't know what the Lacari features were from.

Other than that, welcome to the Freyja System!